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Many
people said that house can show the characteristic of the owner, whether they
choose modern style, minimalist style or even classic style for their house
which can make them feel comfortable. I start to think what my house will be in
the future. I have to concern about many things to build my dream house, start
from budget, type of house etc. I want to build my own house by myself with my
own salary later on. My dream house is a place which is good looking with its modern
style as well as comfortable to live together with my family. I want to build
my dream house in a strategic location which can make access to reach public
places easily such as food court, my office, school of my children, and so on. My
house will have two floors, 3 bedrooms, a dining room, a living room, a
swimming pool, a beautiful garden, and a balcony.
I want
to have my back side house has a garden as well as it front side. A garden in
front of my house will be arranged well with some beautiful flowers which will
make the glance whoever is passing my house is amazed. The other garden is at
the back side of my house. A small garden at the back side of my house will be
very useful because it will be the place to gather with my little family after
doing our routines in a day. I also want to have a private pool for my family
to refresh our mind and as a facility to support us to have a quality time.
Last but not least, I want to have a balcony to enjoy the surrounding, to feel
nice breeze, and to read.
I
desire to complete my modern house with furniture and decoration which can
support the modern sense of my house. I will complete my bedroom with a set of
furniture which is made from wood. In addition, a carpet with sheep hair is
also important to reinforce the sense of warm room. I want my dining room will
be dominated with soft colors like cream and brown. My dining room will be
completed with the elegant style of chairs and tables. I will furnish my living
room with comfortable sofas, beautiful pillows, and several modern lamps for my
living room.
Hopefully
six years later on, I can construct my dream house with modern style including
the modern furniture, good facilities, and strategies location which will make
me love my house so much. I need a comfortable sense in my house which will
make my family and me live happily forever. I will construct my dream house as
soon as possible. My dream house is the house which will be the place to have a
happy family and to spend the rest of my live. The important one to have my
dream house is I have to struggle start from now on in order to achieve my own
goal.
I really love to imagine how my friends' dream house would be through their writing. I can imagine that your beloved house in the six years later would be so warm, comfortable and it would be a modern house, right? I do love the modern one too.
ReplyDeleteI love your small garden at the back side of your house which is used for gathering with your small family. I'm pretty sure that you can maintain the quality time for your small family later on.
I hope I can be one of your guests in your house, someday. ;)
Thanks for your comment Ayu. I like it as well. Yeah you are absolutely right. Comfortable and warm are two important things that cannot be abandoned in every house. Sure, I will invite you to come to my house and will enjoy all of the facilities in my house latter :D
ReplyDelete"Six years later on", hmm.. Already planned as well.. that what i expected from you exactly, rather than my writing that just using all of my imagination but I'm not mention about how could i make my own dream house and how will i plan to make it later. I think it would be your extra point in your writing.
ReplyDeleteit is really good to have an imagination about your future dream house, but its great to already have a plan about your future dream house..
Thanks for visiting my blog Grizz :)
ReplyDeleteYap, I used to imagine what my future will be especially for my dream house. Beside the imagination, I need to plan it as well to make it become affordable for me.
I like your imagination, even you inspire me in planning my dream house to be much more interesting.
Maybe you don't have any plans yet but latter I believe you can have a great plan about your dream house.
Hi Indra, this is a great writing I think. This writing can show me that you are a perfectionist person. That is why you can write your ideas very specific and use much vocabularies to support your ideas. You do not write an ordinary ideas but extraordinary one. Detail and specific are shown in this writing. I think that's all from me.
ReplyDeleteCheers
Yura :*
Indra,Your writing is very good because you can develop the simple topic to be interesting. In your writing there is not a problem and it's almost perfect,that is one of prove if you are a good writer.I agree with you I also want to build my own house with complete facility by my own salary later on in the future same with you, because I think house is something important for me, the great place together with part of my family.
ReplyDeleteIndra, in my opinion your ideas covered very well in your writing because I can understand what you mean and what you want. You have lots of vocabularies which make your writing seems excelent, but I think the order is little bit inappropriate. I think it is too early to explain about how your house will be in the first paragraph. Explanation needed but I think you put too much explanation there. Overall your writing is very good. Planning is very important and I think so. I cannot imagine how nice it will be if later we can build that house perfectly.
ReplyDeleteIt must be nice :-)
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ReplyDeleteIndra, as i imagine about your house, that will so comfortable when i visit to your house.
ReplyDeleteactually your dream house is futuristic that make me want to make the same house like you.
your writing is nice that will the reader easy to understand what will happen on six years later.
thank you, :)
Dear all,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for sharing your ideas in my writing, I'm so glad :D
I love all of your critisms, suggestions, and compliments. Those will be very beneficial for me in developing my writing skill.